After reading your peers’ paragraphs, let’s describe the following picture using the vocabulary we have acquired. PLEASE, write in comment BOX
In-class activity: Describing the living room B2/C
March 30th, 2020 56 Comments
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Fatima zahra moussaoui says:
the picture present a two-story modern house with a magical design, that shows novelty and classy. in fact this distinctive concept envices how we can welluse our house space and gain more room in a small place , in the most sophisticated creative way. What is the most, they kept the place so cozy and warm. Actually, the fournitures are so comfy and relaxing. Cushy sofa made with leather, chairs with squashy pillows and an armchair what is the perfect place to spend your evening reading a book. The floor is so artistically tiled and covered with fluffy rugs and patchy carpets that all goes together with the opulent wall colors.
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Noha chaib says:
Hey fatima zahra,
I really liked your essay, you really knew how to well describe th epicture. But i think that to improve your essay, you should work more on the punctuation, as well as you should use more linking words. And finnaly you should be more concise. However, i really like the fact that you used a lot of new vocab.
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The picture above represents a luxurious good-looking house. Its architecture its just beyond perfect. When i firstly layed my eyes on the picture, i automatically was attracted by the fancy furnitures and decorations, and of course by that huge comfy sofa, it really just gives you the envy of laying in there. And what also is really beautiful is that fluffy carpet. Its really insane how everything matches perfectly
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The picture above represents a luxurious good-looking house. Its architecture its just beyond perfect. When i firstly layed my eyes on the picture, i automatically was attracted by the fancy furnitures and decorations, and of course by that huge comfy sofa, it really just gives you the envy of laying in there. I also loved that fluffy carpet, it just gives a really astethic vibe to the room. Its really insane how everything matches perfectly. (corrected version)
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Great paragraph with multiple vocab Just we dont put the , before ‘’and’’ i believe you just didn’t pay attention.
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Marwa Zerguit says:
The picture above portrays a highly designed room. The lighting is modern and it makes the room look delightful. The use of different shades of brown give off a feeling of luxury and grace. Overall, this view never ceases to amaze me by its dark yet astonishing design.
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Ranya says:
I think your paragraph is well organized and concise, i like the way you used the different vocabulary and expressions the teacher gave us. I think there is a small mistake when you said “the use of different shades of brown give …” i think you should use “gives” instead of “give” .In a nutshell, I think it’s a great description and I loved the adjectives.
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When we first lay our eyes on the picture we can see a large and ritzy living room with a cozy and comfortable vibe, but still very graceful and stylish in appearance. I really love how these colors create this mesmerizing harmony together but also how pleasingly ingenious and simple the choice of the furniture is. In a nutshell, this design knocked my socks off.
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Hi! I really like your essay because it’s short and the ideas are well organised. The vocabulary was used evenly and in the right place.
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In my point of view, this living room seens very warm. In other words ,at the back ground we see a beautiful painting and also a projector probably used to watch films we see also some highly designed lamps. In addition to this, at the other side of the living room we see the reading corner near to a library
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We see that the architect uses natural materials that makes a green touch to the design. Morover ,the carpets are also huge and modernely designed .All in all ,the living room is cozy and comfortable.-
Rayan Mokhtari says:
I like this paragraph, description wise, the use of vocabulary was high class and fancy. Although I mainly chose this one because I see he noticed something that most people have not noticed, it is the video projector hanging from the roof. Although there is a misuse of punctuation in so many sentences, but I like the way he described the architecture of the room, etc…
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Nizar Saddik says:
The picture represents a highly designed room that represents modernity with its shiny furnitures and luxurious accessories. In addition to this, the selection of colors make more stylish and fashionable. However, the floor is artistically tiled with a blend of deep homely browns and covered with a patchy carpet. The polished sofa is so cozy that you you can relax peacefully in. Overall, this room blew me away for its graceful embellishment.
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Hala says:
The picture above represents a highly designed living room with a exquisitely elegant architecture. When we first lay our eyes on the picture, we can clearly see a cosy environment. It is composed with a brown lumpy chair in the corner, modern cushy sofas wich give you the feeling of warmth and the desire of relaxing. The choose of the marvelous painting replayed on the wall contains with the use of dark colours. The floor is discovered with a patchy carpet. The stylish living room really embraces modernism.
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I think you had a very good paragraph but i noticed one mistake « a exquisitely » the correction is an exquisitely
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There is an other mistake: it is composed with. The correction is: it is composed of.
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The picture represents a highly designed room that represents modernity with its shiny furnitures and luxurious accessories. In addition to this, the selection of colors makes it more stylish and fashionable. However, the floor is artistically tiled with a blend of deep homely browns and covered with a patchy carpet. The polished sofa is so cozy that you you can relax peacefully in. Overall, this room blew me away for its graceful embellishment.
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I think your paragraph is very good , you used a beautiful vocabulary and linking words that makes a charm to your paragraph .I can’t say something bad about your paragraph . All in all ,your paragraph is perfect.
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I appreciate your paragraph. It contains beautiful vocabulary. But I believe that there is a kind of repetition of represent in the first sentence. While try to avoid long sentences by using punctuation marks.
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The picture represent a classy modern living room with a view. In fact, it make you feel so comfy with the grey sofa and the squashy pillow. Also, the little tree in the corner breaks away the darkness of the colors and the huge painting on the wall its just a fancy touch to the room. I love the addition of the projector in the room, a great tool to the perfect cosy family movie night. In addition to all this we have also o stunning place with a bookshelf and the most comfortable relaxing chair you can find and the perfect low lighting, if you love reading that’s your escape peaceful place for sure
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Yasmine :) says:
This picture represents a splendid and delightful modern room, this place is filled with different kinds of decorations such as some paintings and small trees, those small details give to this space life and make it look more spacious. Even Though, the choice of color was a little dark, it didn’t make this room look stuffy, but on the contrary it only gave it more modernity and authenticity.
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Naoufel Ghannami says:
The picture represents a fascinating open-space containing several luxury furniture and decorations. From the first look, you will be amazed by the high-quality work, the designer did. The cold fresh air, coming from the door, and the fluffy fabric carpet makes you eager to sit, relax and enjoy your time. Equally important, the readers will be most amazed and attracted by the brown chair near the library, which gives freedom and comfort feeling while reading. From a deep side, the use of green plants and the remarkable wallpaper shows a strong connection and harmony, representing modernity and the environment.
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Meryem Smaha says:
a well organised paragraph , the way you were describing the colours and the harmony between the materials was amazing , a simple thing is are we able to see the cold fresh air in the picture because we’re supposed to describe otherwise well done
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Naoufel’s paragraph is in my opinion a very good one, since he used some high class vocabulary and expressions, i also loved the way he connected between his ideas (it was very well organised). I just want to highlight a small punctuation “mistake”, in the second line: “you will be amazed by the high-quality work, the designer did.”, I think you should not put a comma because it would change the meaning, but apart from that, I find it outstanding.
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when you first take a look at the picture a well apointed room appears . the right selection of the furniture made the place snug and open-plan . The use of the dark brown couch and the black lumpy armchair gave the room a cavernous look , added to the plants in the corner which spawn a natural charm in a serious vibe . Well , this is architecture.
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I believe you wrote a good paragraph. We easily recognize the description’s organization. However, I see that you didn’t describe enough the carpets. But also, you didn’t focus on the background. I think you didn’t pay attention to the library, which reflects the reading’s importance. You can add to your paragraph the lights and the open-door effect. In general, your paragraph remains good and well-organized. Thanks
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Karam LEBRAZI says:
The picture above represents a large and magical living room that gives off a reason to live. The long leather luxurious couch and the fluffy fabric carpet spread comfort and make you long to sit. Additionally, the selection of dark colored paints makes this house extravagantly spacious. Equally important, the wall is more dazzling with its magical painting colored with the mix of the black and white.
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Hiba Zaoui says:
Great paragraph with multiple vocab . the mistake that i found is dark colors not dark colored
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This living room is beautifully elegant. I will get ensconced in the lumpy couch and the data-show that sets a movie. What a cozy life. The mashup between the brown, the black and the grey is so luxurious. And the plant in each corner and separating between areas with the wood wall give that natural air and it’s more relaxing. Moreover the armchair design is so fancy with a book is so exquisite. Also the lights spots designs are outstanding. All the rest of the materials go in perfect harmony with the comfy vibe. To end I’m blew by this masterpiece, just a perfect apartment for the quarantine.
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Actually I thank you for your paragraph, it amazed me a lot, your have great expressions. In the other side, i found an strange expression which is “What a cozy life.” , i guess it’ weird to add it. Also you said “the plant in each corner”, and there is one single plant in ONE single corner. And you made some few grammar mistakes “Moreover (COMMA) …….” , “All the rest…….goES….” because “the rest” is singular, and “To end (COMMA)……”. But in general, you did well 🙂 .
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Manar messaoudi says:
This picture represents a favorably designed living room with a very stylish and elegant long grey couch, with different cushions, and a fashionable chair next to an awesome lamp .I really admire the use of the huge light-colored painting in the wall, it makes the living room a more better and pleasant place.The floor is artistically tiled and covered with two carpets.
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Amimar Douae says:
Actually I really loved Manar’s paragraph .It’s short and well structured .But i have some remarques ..I notice that the paragraph is composed of two long senteces .For that i think if you use more punctuation it is going to be better .Also you said (makes the living room a more better ) , i think that it is better to say (Makes thae living room better ) .Finally i want to sa that your paragraph is just amazing
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The picture exposes a beautifully elegant living room .It is not only luxurious but also highly designed and even drop-dead gorgeous .In fact , the use of the dark colors made the room look spacious .Added to that , liying on the crozy sofa and reading a book is the best thing to do in order to relax after a stressful day .Besides , the patchy carpets add a fancy touch to the great decoration .To conclude , this living room is just fantastic .
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Brahim boulouiz says:
The picture represents an attractive and highly designed living room with a creative use of accessories that are luxurious and fancy. From the big consistency of all this furniture we can say that the designer is creative. When I lay first my eyes on the picture the small library attracted my attention, I enjoyed not only the arrangement of the books but also the luminosity of this small area, and the refined materiel that give the motivation to read. And what make this place more marvelous is the fluffy carpet that much with the couch. All in all, this living room is really fancy and cozy.
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Khaoula says:
I find that Brahim’s paragraph is great. He described the whole room even the library that I personally didn’t pay attention for. Added to this, the vocabulary he used totally combines with the picture. A small mistake that he made is “much”, maybe it should be “matches”. In general, I really appreciate his work.
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The picture above represents a highly designed living room with a creative use of luxurious materials that made it appear a cozy place. While the use of grey, white, and brown colors, the space seems neutral and the dark wallpaper, floor lamps, rugged textures made it appear highly soft and elegant. Equally important, there is a marvelous harmony between the different elements of the room. I really appreciate the exquisite architecture and graceful embellishment.
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the paragraph was very good, i loved the way of you description, i just wanna say that you didn’t speak about the library and i think is an inportant part of this description. Apart from this point your paragraphe was amazing.
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Aya yousfi says:
When you firstly lay your eyes on this picture , you will be automatically fascinated by this highly designed living room. The use of the dark colors in the decoration made the space more relaxing and cozy . The artistic painting with his colors added a special aesthetic to the space. The floor is covered with a carpet that has the same colors of the artistic painting. Without forgetting the sofa which gives me an impulse to lay down and relax on it . All in all, the living room is really fancy and drop-dead gorgeous
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The picture portrays a beautifully designed living room separated by an oak wood wall into two areas. The first side depicts a cozy sofa, underneath which is a black and white rug. Not to mention the beautiful and ravishing painting extending along the wooden wall, which gives the room a whole different feel. Looking closely to the picture, we can see a video projector hanging from the roof, which means that this side of the living room could have been used as a homecinema. Coming back to the left side of the picture, what grabs my attention is the feeling of relaxation and inspiration that cozy chair gives me, on its legt is a bunch of books arranged on the wooden wall. Lying underneath the chair is a patchy and lumpy carpet which matches the colors used in the room. All in all, this build blew me away, it is outstanding.
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Bayane says:
I really enjoy reading your essay. It is well structured. I like the vocabulary you used it is very precise and analytic. Through your paragraph you were able to share with us some details that I personally didn’t recognize. All in all, it is an excellent, concise essay.
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hats for you! just the amount of details you highlights it’s just amazing wish i can write in this way
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The picture above depicts a living room/reading space , which are well put together. On the right side ‘ there is an aesthetically designed reading space in which the atmosphere is really cozy . The long comfy chair in the middle , the slightly lit lamp , and the books on the wooden shelves scream sit and read . Besides that there’s the green exotic plant that adds more charm to the space . On the left side , there are grey soft comfy fabric sofas . The big black and white painting in background is just well concocted with the other elements of the room . I salute the designer for his piece of art . Chaimae Ao.)
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The picture above demonstrates a delightful, luxurious apartment. Despite it being small, the coherent design makes it look elegant. The use of dark colors for the walls adds depth to the apartment. The fuzzy, comfy materials and accessories make it look warmer, while the various geometrical patterns add some edginess to it. The floor paved with a beige-tinted wood and the roof painted in white cut the darkness to make the palate look more balanced. The artificial trees in the corners add some lively colors and the masterpiece displayed on the black wall adds some contrast to the room. I like the fact that there’s a wooden wall that hides a lovely room, where there are shelves filled up with different books and some cozy chairs to make yourself feel comfortable and relaxed.
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The picture above represents a beautiful living room, it contains a grey, elegant and cosy couch with fluffy pillows and a well-designed carpet, it has two simple and modern chandeliers and an amazing art work. On the other side of the living room that is separated by wood, we find a reading space with a gorgeous plant and modern lamp. (Lina)
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Mohammed Elguerrouj says:
I think that you described everything that showed in the picture
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Chaimae Aourchan says:
Your paragraph is precise actually. I like your description’s style . I have a little remark ,which is you should’ve used on the walls and not for the walls when you were talking about the black color . It ‘ll sound more harmonious .That’s all .
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The picture above represents a luxurious and attractive living room mixed with dark and white. As a matter of fact, it has a big brown sofa, fluffy pillows, and a fuzzy carpet and there is a lumpy armchair. Added to that, what makes the place extraordinary is not only the good use of materials but also how it’s very organized. Besides, the accessories are very attractive enough to keep you in the room and laying on the sofa. All in all, that place is really drop-dead gorgeous.
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lina el Mazzouji says:
this paragraph is well oorganized, I love the way you used the linking words and the vocabulary is really good as I expected, I prefer if you wrote” added to that ” or “what makes this place extraordinary”and not both. thank you very much
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ADAM AMALLAH says:
the picture represents a living room who is very modern and lush.The sofas are so comfortable that you can relax.The design is well applied with extravagant colors and there is a carpet which is very soft.Seen the beauty of this living room it could be very expensive
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Your paragraph is really good but I think that you didn’t describe the picture with details
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The following photograph represents an enormous and glorious living room.The decorations are extremely costly and well apointed,the grey comfy sofa is simple yet still splendid that it gives a cozy vibe to the whole area.And what is more wide eyed are the green trees on the mend that refreshes the soul.Furthermore,the cool yellowlight makes the room so peaceful and serene.All in all the thrilling room can turn anyones bad mood to a better one.
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Wadie Azimani says:
the picture above represents a luxurious and highly designed room with modern decoration . In fact the great choose of colors made it look more fashionable. In addition to this the spongy pillows give an impulse to lay down and relax on the sofa
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you were very concised , your way of using the vocabulary was good , i hope if you could describe it more to grab the attention of the reader , otherwise good job
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he following photograph represents an enormous and glorious living room.The decorations are extremely costly and well apointed,the grey comfy sofa is simple yet still splendid that it gives a cozy vibe to the whole area, what attracted me more is the well arranged bookshelves that drives everyone to read.And what is more wide eyed are the green trees on the mend that refreshes the soul.Furthermore,the cool yellowlight makes the room so peaceful and serene.All in all the thrilling room can turn anyones bad mood to a better one.
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Hadile Lembarki says:
The picture describe a huge and ritzy living room where we can feel comfort and freedom. The use of some colors made the dark furniture bounced back to life. All in all, this luxurious living room took my brain away.
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Wissal Raguigue says:
When you firstly lay your eyes on the picture, you’ll be automatically fascinated by the the open space between the dining table and the luxurious living room which makes you feel comfortable . What attracts my attention is the integration of the of the dark colors in the decoration , the stairs ,the lamp, the patchy carpet … and the spacious effect of the light colors, which makes it look fancy, drop-dead and gorgeous, and this show us the architect’s creativity shines at it’s brightest in this home
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Roumayssae Messaoudi says:
The picture above presents highly designed living room with open space for relaxing. The brown sofa looks so comfy and cozy, with green fancy plant and stylish painting, who make the living room looks stuffy. In the other side, dressed a relaxing chair where I can read carefully a book, from the book case.
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