After reading your peers’ paragraphs, let’s describe the following picture using the vocabulary we have acquired. PLEASE, write in comment BOX
In-class activity: Describing the living room B2
March 31st, 2020 98 Comments
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Rime El Badaoui says:
The picture represents a huge and ritzy room that contains many elegant and deluxe decorations that give the place an aesthetic vibe. What makes the place more marvelous is not only good use of materials, but also how it looks comfy. The lumpy couch and the spongy pillows give me an impulse to lay down and relax on the cushy sofa. The fluffy carpet matches well with the vibe of that place. Without forgetting the ravishing paintings displayed on the wall, and also the books in the wooded rooftops. Besides, the colors used are a good match, and also how it pulled out the charm of the black and gray combination. All in all, the room is really well decorated, especially with the two plants, which made it drop-dead gorgeous.
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mohammed bakri says:
It’s a full detaled essay of the room, the only mistake is “not only THE good use….”.Otherway, it’s simply mind-blowing and excellent .
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The picture represents a luxury designed living room, with 2 sides .
The first one is for relax, it’s contain a huge grey covered sofa and an elegant paint , right next to it, we find a plant that represent the nature side of the room . in the second side, we find a mini size of a catchy sofa , a place where you can read and relax in the same time .-
Youssef Gharafi says:
(It’s contain)->It contains
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I find your paragraph well elaborated and strucured. I liked the way you wrote it. I just found dome mistakes that I hope you will fix:
1. I think it’s better to write two than 2
2. In the first line, I think that you need to use (:) because you are going to explain.
3. As Youssef already said, It’s (it contains) not (it’s contain)
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ADAM AMALLAH says:
you made the same thing that i wrote
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The picture above represents a very elegant and very organized house. Its design is really fancy with the creative use of materials which gives the charm and a dazzling appearance to this house. The selection of furniture makes this house very stylish and creates the starting place of hope and dreams. The magic thing about this house is that it feels good to leave and it feels even better to come back. I think that the living room looks opulent with the floor which is coveredwith fluffy carpet and also with family photographs which are displayed on the wall .
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Nouhayla El Aouni says:
Hi dear Lamyae.
Actually i don’t have anything to add,you’r paragraph was very good,but as teacher sad we have to write a small paragraph it was kind of long,but i was interesting.Again, you’r paragraph is amazing,keep it like this ❤❤
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I can see on the photo a large brown piece and lots of other brown accessories like the chairs and the lamp. Otherwise I think this piece makes me want to read books in peace and suggests that I break down all my problems and have a wonderful time
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The photo represent a luxury and a large brown piece and lots of other brown accessories like the chairs and the lamp. Otherwise I think this piece makes me want to read books in peace and suggests that I break down all my problems and have a wonderful time
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Akram says:
The picture represents a highly modern designed living room.the dark walls and the brown wooden wall maches perfectly.and the luxirious furnitures add a unique touch to the living room specially the patchy carpet,the beautiful sofa,the lamps and the fluffy pillows.and we can see two plants which gives a very good look on the entire living room and the black and white painting brightens the living room and makes it fancier.
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Your essay is a very good one,i’m really amazed by the way you describe,to be honest it’s just wonderful,keep going my friend,i have nothing to say
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Nohayla Hajjout says:
I really like you essay, but i found some mistakes, such as:
The dark walls and the brown wooden match perfectly.
Two plants which give not gives.
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The picture above represents a beautifully elegant house with a creative use of materials, which makes it appear fancy and refined. The painting displayed on the wall, the fluffy and patchy rug covering the floor, and the cozy sofa there make it look more and more exquisite. Yet it looks unpleasant beceause it has no fresh air. To illustrate, it’s airless and fuggy.
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Because
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Because
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If you walk into this living room,you’ll see a cozy little room,where there’s a sofa wich can help you to relax,not forgetting the beauty of the peinture that is hanging on the wall,and also this room has a high ceiling that gives it a fancy and a modern look
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Roa Kajout says:
The picture represents not only a splendid but also a huge and even a ritzy room.In point of fact ,just when we look at the picture ,we find that relaxing on the sofa is the best choice after a nice dinner.Added to this,the integration of dark colors in the decoration cut the spacious effet of the light colors.It’s a large modern looking chandelier.All In all,that room is really fancy.
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The picture above represents a novel living room.It contains a patchy carpet covering the floor with a comfy sofas and armchairs.What makes It fancier is not just the lumpy couch,but also the astonishing drawing displayed on the wall,in addition to the cozy accessories here and there that make It look stunning
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Zayneb ibrahimi says:
It was really good essay i did like it even if it was kind of short i love the way you are describing the room :)))
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It’s just an amazing feeling just by seeing this mind blowing living room, this grey confortable sofa with black pillows where you can just lay in and relaxe reading your favorite book with a hot chocolate or watching the best movie you’ve ever watched before !
In addition to this theses cute Lamps who add a touch of simplicity and modernity at the same time . We can clearly see the different plants who Break this darkness mood or black color it adds a natural green color . in other words we can say that it’s a mox of luxury simplicity and modernity 🙂
All in all the words can’t describe how much breathtaking is this living room !-
You have some spelling mistakes.exp:comfortable(confortable).In terms of punctuation,you misuse It.Generally,It is well done but you must focus on the description of the picture and try to avoid speaking about some unimportant details.exp:to watch the best movies ever…Please,avoid repitition.exp:simplicity and modernity
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Aww thank you youssef but for tv and movies just to explain more :)))
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the picture represents a luxurious modern elegant living room I think it is divided into two parts one part to rest and the other to read books. For the design of this living room it is very beautiful. I really like the colors they are extravagant and also I find that the pillows are cozy
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and elegant
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Sadiki wissal says:
When I firstly lay my eyes on this picture representing a morvelous ritzy room, I get fascinated and inspired by the ornate modern design and how the timeless pieces of furniture are well organized and carefully placed. One word ^ it’s just Wonderful^.
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i think your paragraph it s very rewarding but you don t describe the details although you used good vocabulary
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Khalil Margoum says:
The picture above represents an artistic architecture it is splendid and delightful . The long grey couch spread comfort and make you want to sit relax and read your favorite book . Actually , what makes this place cazy and warmth is the combination between colors and the light. Overall , this house blew me away for its exquisite architecture and graceful embellishment .
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The picture above represents an artistic architecture it is splendid and delightful . The long grey couch spread comfort and make you want to sit relax and read your favorite book . Actually , what makes this place cozy and warmth is the combination between colors and light. Overall , this house blew me away for its exquisite architecture and graceful embellishment .
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zakariya serraji says:
i really like your essay and enjoy it with the beautiful vocabulary that you used
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The rug is great because it gives the floor a very stunning look and the plant next to the floor lump makes the place very comfy to read books or doing homeworks. In addition to this, the use of various patterns and materials makes
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The picture above shows a very modern house with the fantastic decor that attracts you to buy it or makes you very enthusiastic to live in it.
In fact, the armchair and the couches are so cozy to relax on it.The rug is great because it gives the floor a very stunning look and the plant next to the floor lump makes the place very comfy to read books or doing homeworks. In addition to this, the use of various patterns and materials makes the house cozier but fancier in the same time.
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Manal Abaadi says:
The picture above represents a splendid and ritzy living room. It’s architecture is groundbreaking. The furniture gives off a felling of comfort and freedom.
What amazes me the most is how the colors matches gorgeously. The grey couch and the patchy pillows seems cozy and give an aesthetic environment.
The dispatched masterpiece makes the room fancier.-
Manal Abbadi says:
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Aymen says:
Personally, I think your paragraph is outstandingly written. I believe you used the acquired vocabulary properly and unlike me you used more details to describe makes it more realistic.In brief I’m really impressed about your description.
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When you first lay your eyes on this picture, you will automatically be fascinated by the ornate design of a cozy fancy living room. The marvelous place is composed of fluffy lumpy couch and armchair, attractive lights, green plants, a fuzzy carpet and different sorts of luxurious accessories displayed on the walls.
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I think that the paragraph is perfectly made. You organized it very well, you used the new vocabulary and you respected the ponctuation. Keep going!
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Aya Souidi says:
When you firstly lay your eyes on the picture, you will be amazed by a splendid and delightful living room. It gives a feeling of comfort when you lay down and relax on the cutshy sofa. In addition to this, thare is an amazing combination of colors wich embellishes it more. All in all, the living room is luxurious and fancy.
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Amina el hebil says:
The picture represents an outstanding living room that provides a feeling of comfort and freedom.It contains many luxurious and elegant decorations with a cosy sofas and fancy cushions. What makes the place more marvelous is the stunning painting displayed on the wall wich added a shiny touch. The floor is artistically tilled with a blend of earth tone patchy carpet that makes it beautifully modern. What provides such a gorgeous feeling to chill out!
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Diyae says:
The picture represents a fansy living room wich contains a luxurious decoration and the fourniture is high end and bespoke like the sofa which guives off a feeling of comfort and freedom. After a stressing work laying on this sofa is the best choice to forget all the stress. And this living room shows the greatness of the designer and the architect
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mehdi elhadef says:
fancy*
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Thank you
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great paragraph
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the picture above represents a huge and ritzy room that contains many elegant and luxary decorations .It contains a patchy carpet covering the floor with a comfy sofas and armchair ,
right next to it, we find a plant that represent the nature side of the room . in the second side, we find a mini size of a catchy sofa , a place where you can read and relax in the same time .-
Luxary=luxurious
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It’s a wonderfull essay
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thanks
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It’s an amzing paragraph mehdi!!
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the picture represents a modern living room , that countains a luxury and modern decoration . In the middle , there is a large sofa with a stool , and next to the couch there is a small tree . The room are illuminated with spots and design lamp that’s make the room fancy .
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Katrenada Lembarki says:
It’s a good paragraph Othman, there’s a small mistake which you should put “is” instead of “are” in the last line.
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The picture represents such a delightful room. As we can see the walls are painted in dark brown, and there’s a small wall in the corner of the room made with wood which separates the living room and the library. The sofa there makes you want just to relax, gran a book or watch TV, it looks so comfortable. As for other materials such as the tall frame, the lamps, the plant and the comfy chair makes it look fancier and cozier.
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nada wrote a beautiful paragraph , she used a new vocabs and i appreciate a lot
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Nour El Houda Boujemaoui says:
The picture represents a splendid living room that contains a luxurious and elegant decorations which automatically fascinatevthe visitor and gives off a feeling of relax and freedom .Added to this ,the brown lumpy armchair brought instant brighteness to the space Then,there is a fancy paiting with an homogenous colors .Overall,this house blew me away for its equisitive architecture and greatest creativity.
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The picture represents a splendid living room that contains a luxurious and elegant decorations which automatically fascinatevthe visitor and gives off a feeling of relax and freedom .Added to this ,the brown lumpy armchair brought instant brighteness to the space Then,there is a fancy paiting with an homogenous colors . Overall,this house blew me away for its equisitive architecture and greatest creativity.
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Tasnim fakir says:
The picture present a huge room,just when you see it,you know that it’s a modern room. After drinking a hot tea, the owner of the house sit on the confortablement armchair, and chats with the family.
The kids are playing in the sofa some videos games.
I thing that it’s really fancy-
Tasnime FAKIR says:
Linving room
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omnia says:
_When you lay your eyes on this picture ,you will be attracted and fascinated by this highly fashionable designed living room.I think the choice of armchairs and luxurious accesories
with the integration of dark colors in decoration, create a cozy and cushy place to repose in.-
Lina Oumharch :))))))) says:
Omnia,
Your paragraph is wonderful, it is reach of good adjectives and descriptive sentences, it is also well organized and those are your strengths. However, i noticed that your paragraph is very short and i believe that you can write more, and i also can see that your paragraph is based only on sentences from the “tops paragraph” and i didn’t see any of your personal work and this is your weaknesses. But in general, it is amazing. :))))))
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The picture above represents a fancy and elegant living room. I noticed that the space is divided into two parts; the left side is a small library, the wall is in the form of shells that contains some books, and as a furniture to sit, there is only a long brown chair that looks very comfortable. The right side is larger, i guess it is a living room because there is a big grey sofa in its middle and it was the first thing i recognized in the picture , it doesn’t look only comfortable and cozy but also stylish and opulent. . Equally important, the dark colors of the floor, walls and furniture match very well, and the accessories such as: paintings, plants, lamps and carpets give more elegance and beauty to the space. In one word, this room is just gorgeous.
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Aya ouadi says:
The picture above represents a splendid and delightful home,the living room gives off a feeling of canfort and freedom,it’s looks got.In fact,the color of the sofa and the wall gives you relax.In addition to this ,the ise of various patterns and materials make the house fancy.
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Aya Quassaoui says:
Aya , your description is pretty much good ,but i still think you should work more on it . There are few spelling mistakes , but i will try to convince myself that they are only typing mistakes , because that’s definietly the case .
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I am currently looking at a picture that represents a highly designed living room . The overall view gives it those sort of naturel yet very modern vibes , with the plants and the artwork displayed all over the living room , you will immediatly feel that comfort and cozyness by only contemplating this outstandingly beautiful picture . Besides , those rugs give the whole area a sort of a twist , that feeling of warmthj will pop out of nowhere once you enter this space . In a nutshell , the way the owners of this house decorated their living space , makes it seem like they are professionals at doing it .
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WARMTH
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I think that’s your paragraph is amazing and describe it good way .
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Gorgeous hhh
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the picture represents a splendid living room highly designed when you first lay your eyes on the picture you automatically see that deluxe sofa you can also see those elegant rugs with stripes the living room is well equipped but what attracts more our look is that incredible plant that gives a wonderful touch
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Badr Icherrouten says:
It’s a good essay full of good description . Just you don’t respect the punctuation and the capitalization
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The picture represent a fansy living room which containes a luxuriour material and furniture and fabulouse decoration and sofa gives off a feeling of comfort . And this living room shows the designer’s great creativity .
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I think that your essay is good there are a lot of spelling mistakes I appreciate the last phrase you end with, I like your way of writing but pity you didn’t write a lot.
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spelling mistakes like what
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Kaoutar sahil says:
The magnificent picture is about a lovely living room, with its fancy and elegant furniture, decoration and lighting. The integration od dark colours everywhere cuts the spacious effects of the light colors . The lumpy couch and spongy pillow gives the person an impulse to chill or relax the whole day with all comfort. Aloso the green plants makes us fell alive !
I will be toraly surprised ans shocked if someone didn’t like it or better saying “adoring” this room!-
The magnificent picture is about a lovely living room, with its fancy and elegant furniture, decoration and lighting. The integration of dark colours everywhere cuts the spacious effects of the light colors . The lumpy couch and spongy pillow gives the person an impulse to chill or relax the whole day with all comfort. Also the green plants makes us fell alive !
I will be toraly surprised ans shocked if someone didn’t like it or better saying “adoring” this room! -
Hadile Lembarki says:
“The magnificent picture is about a lovely living room, with its fancy and elegant furniture, decoration and lighting. The integration od dark colours everywhere cuts the spacious effects of the light colors . The lumpy couch and spongy pillow gives the person an impulse to chill or relax the whole day with all comfort. Aloso the green plants makes us fell alive !
I will be toraly surprised ans shocked if someone didn’t like it or better saying “adoring” this room!”
It’s a good paragraph, but I think that their is some spelling mistakes. Overall it’s a good paragraph.
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The picture describe a huge and ritzy living room where we can feel comfort and freedom. The use of some colors made the dark furniture bounced back to life. All in all, this luxurious living room took my brain away
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Your description is actually really great, its brevity makes it special, also your own opinion at the end turned it into an amazing one
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Souhayla Amjoun says:
Just looking to the picture above we can see a fabulous and cheerful room with highly modernly design. On the floor there is a fuzzy carpet and a sofa where you can relax.
In front of it there’s a plant that increases the aesthetic of the place. In addition to this the wall painting also plays an essential role in making the place looks brighter and glisten.
Those light lights touch make the place look more marvelous . I think that the decoration is focused on the light colors that makes the place peaceful and uneventful.-
Niama Talbi says:
I think that it will better if you change ”just looking ”by looking
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The picture above represents a s splendid and delightful home when I firstly open my eyes I was fascinated by its highly designe. What makes the place more attractive and marvelous is not just the good way of using material but also how it looks comfy ,the brown and white fulffy carpet spread comfort and make you want to sit and relax and it makes the place look fancy. This home blew me away for its exquisite architecture and graceful embellishments.
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So firstly you paragraph is organized and you have used some new vocabulary. Just I remarked that you didn’t used punctuation marks ,like Between home and when you need a full stop.
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Abdellah ELouazzani says:
The picture represents a beautifully elegant bedroom with creative use of materials that makes it seem luxurious . it modernely designed . it is large enough for a side to relax ,it has a carpet , a grey sofa , a confy chair. added to that , the paintings which are dispatched on the wall add a special view
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Zainab Merhrioui says:
The concept represents a nicely decorated living room and it gives off a feeling of comfort. The lumpy couch and the armchairs give me an impulse to lay down and relax. The floor is covered with a patchy carpet. Overall the living room is highly decorated and it’s really fancy.
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I think that paintings which are on the wall should be present in your paragraph because it shows a unique view
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Abdellah boubker says:
The picture represents a highly designed sitting room. It is small but splendid at the same time. When we see it the first time we notice that it’s relaxing . That’s an amazing feeling while sertting in the luxirious arm chair and watching t.v .
The cozy caccessories here and there make it look stunning. All in all,this sitting room is an example of a gorgous room.-
In my opinion, the essay is great! he used good vocabulary and he described everything that was in the picture. The essay is well organized, and i really like it.
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Wissal Raguigue says:
First of all, thank you for your remarkable efforts. Secondly, I want to give you an advice about the way of writing a paragraph while you’re describing. As we know talking is not writing, but unfortunately you don’t pay attention to this .
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When you firstly lay your eyes on the picture, you’ll be automatically fascinated by the the open space between the dining table and the luxurious living room which makes you feel comfortable . What attracts my attention is the integration of the of the dark colors in the decoration , the stairs ,the lamp, the patchy carpet … and the spacious effect of the light colors, which makes it look fancy, drop-dead and gorgeous, and this show us the architect’s creativity shines at it’s brightest in
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That’s a good description.you vused many adjectives and a good vocabulary. But you must chek you punctuation beceause there is some mistakes.
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Roumayssae Messaoudi says:
The picture above presents highly designed living room with open space for relaxing. The brown sofa looks so comfy and cozy, with green fancy plant and stylish painting, who make the living room looks stuffy. In the other side, dressed a relaxing chair where I can read carefully a book, from the book case.
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rasha makhoukh says:
rouma , your paragraph is short but not really concise .
instead of saying that make you said who “who is always used for people”.
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The picture above represents a splendid house . Its architecture is mesmerinzing .The open space btween the dining table and the living room gives off a feeling of comfort and freedom . This living room contains many elegant and deluxe decoration that give the place aesthetic vibe . The dark brown couch and the brown and off white a fuufy fabric carpet spread comfort aand make you want to sit relax , and watch TV or read a book . Added to this , the use of various patterns and materials makes the house cozier but fancier at the same time . Overall, this house blew me away for its graceful emblishment .
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The concept represents a nicely decorated living room and it gives off a feeling of comfort. The lumpy couch and the armchairs give me an impulse to lay down and relax. The floor is covered with a patchy carpet. Overall the living room is highly decorated and it’s really fancy.
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Azhar arbouch says:
The picture represents a fascinating and highly designed home with a large and well equipped bookcase creating a beautiful and cozy area for reading also i appreciate the fluffy fabric sofa decorating the living room added to this we can see a very classic and skillfully drawn and painted board on the wall .besides the nature touch with the tree vase make the environment more comffy and stylish.
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