After reading your peers’ paragraphs, let’s describe the following picture using the vocabulary we have acquired.
Writing Time: 5 minutes
Inspiring paragraphs:
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ayoub farsi says:
This picture represents a designed house with a useful materials and stuff .In fact , the house contains many cozy places , such as sofa and armchair .
In brief , the floor is vonvered with patchy and almso it is artistically tilled.Also, the house is surrounded with beautiful elegance.The furniture is high end the fabrics are varied with different beautiful colors
Finally, this organisation blew me away for its splendid architecture.-
1. You wrote: … house with a useful materials and stuff .In fact , the house contains many cozy p…
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2. You wrote: …th a useful materials and stuff .In fact , the house contains many cozy places , s…
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3. You wrote: …ct , the house contains many cozy places , such as sofa and armchair . In brief , …
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6. You wrote: … and armchair . In brief , the floor is vonvered with patchy and almso it is artisticall…
Feedback: Possible spelling mistake found You wrote: …, the floor is vonvered with patchy and almso it is artistically tilled.Also, the hou…Feedback: Possible spelling mistake found
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AMINE BEN says:
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This is a very relaxing picture with a very beautiful architecture infact the open space between the leaving room and the dining table gives a feeling of confort but also the darkness and the brown sofa gives a feeling of relaxation. In addition to this the furniture are very modern and very useful. In my opinion it’s not necessary to leave their but it’s a perfect home for a normal family.
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Your paragraph is very good ,the content is excellent but you should add ponctuation in the first sentence .we should have
architecture .In fact ………
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The following picture really impressed me . In fact , It has a distinctive concept with a wonderful architecture . It is splendid and delightful , It express the creativity and innovation . So the architect makes lot of efforts to achieve this wonderful achievement
All in all , this space is one the best thing that I have seen .-
Med Zaoui says:
It’s very good but in the concluding sentence you said “one best thing that I have seen” why did you add one
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The balcony in front of sofa makes you feel fresh air and freedom. Besides, architecte uses very well raw materials to create a cozy elegant atmosphere. Moreover, the carpet seems to be well designed and suitable with the house colors. Finnally , the architecte is very creative and original. In brief, I was fascinated by this gorgeous house.
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Th following picture reflects the creativity and the innovation. In fact,the house is beautifully elegant with a patchy carpet and a comfortable sofa and even black lumpy armchair that made this house a piece of art.Added to that, the luxurious living room focused on a classical and timeless pieces of furniture that attract the viewers from the first time.Lastly and more importantly,the specific choice of colors shows modernity.
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The picture above represent a splendid and a comfy enviorment. You will be fascinated by its’ design, the specific choice of color embraces modernism and gives it charm,and the material,accessories and the carpets make ut fancier and more elegant.
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Abir’s paragraph is great with beautiful vocabulary.But there are some mistakes of spelling and grammar.Such as:
represent(you forgot s)
enviorment(enviroment)
Ut(it)
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when you lay your eyes on this beatiful picture, you see a cozy environnement with a accurate selection of dazzling fournitures . It reflects a groudbreaking creativity and a splendid and brilliant house, the fluffy fabric carbet and the comfortable sofa makes you want to sit, relax , and read a book.Besides, the specific choice of colors embraces modernism and high technology, the fabrics are spotless and the colors coordinate in mued natural hues. To conclude , it represents a luxiourous house and make it looks like a piece of art
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DSG younes says:
sit relax and watching TV not reading a book
it s a big problem with you bro
luxurious
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thank you
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the picture above represents a beautiful and a splendid room . When my eyes firstly lay that picture i was automaticly surprised by the good designeof the room . the use of some decoration lights who gives the life to the dark fourniture . Overall , this houseme and even took me to a dream full of good architecture .
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Great work 🙂
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I’m not I said great work what’s the problem?
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tnx amiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiine
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Younes your paragraph was very good , simple and clean also you give very good information
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youness tsouli mistakes : lay that picture / the good designeof the room / decoration lights who gives / houseme
Correction : lay on that picture / the good design fo the room / some decoration lights which gives-
good vocabulary , good organization , good use of ponctuation Great work Mr.DS GOLD
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just spelling mistakes
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The picture above represents a highly planned living room, the spectacular innovation of this room is the opening of the space between the bookcase and the sofa that makes the coexistence easier and cozy.
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The picture above represents a highly planned living room,the spectacular innovation of this room is the opening of the space between the bookcase and the sofa that makes the coexistence easier and cozy.
In addition to this, this new style of rooms have an incredible distribution of space and every corner is functional and innovative.-
Riyad Afroukh says:
There is no mistakes and it’s very clean .
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The only problem was that the paragraph was a little short but it was basically a great work with some possibilities to imagine this image good work 🙂
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When you firstly lay your eyes on the picture , you will automatically be fascinated by the highly designed room . The long leather dark brown and off with a fluffy fabric carpet spread comfort and make you want to sit and have a great feeling . The use of the light makes this house look extravagantly spacious . The fabrics are spotless and color coordinate in muted natural hues . It makes the place look fancy .
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Riad’s paragraph:
The house looks.He forgot the s.
The fabrics are spotless and the colors.He said “and color”.
The place looks fancy.He forgot the s. -
The house looks.He forgot the s.
The fabrics are spotless and the colors.He said “and color”.
The place looks fancy.He forgot the s.
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the following picture reflects a dazzling living room witch contains a long, gray coutch that looks very cozy and confortible. If you take a better look at the picture, you may relise that the colors in it are very suitible with each other. The dark colors are not usaly good-looking in many howses, but in sertan ones, it gives a great efect; and this one is from them. So, in breif, this room is just splendid.
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OMAR.TS says:
which not wich.
confortable not confortible.
houses not howses.
effect not efect.##Arij##
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The house appears as a peice of art.In fact, it reflects a groundbreaking innovation.In addition to that it is made with the deep meaning of art and innovation. When you lay your eyes you will see this cozy envirenement you will have this desire to go and relax in their. Besides, the brown color give to this peice of art a unique touch to this beauty and fascinating house. In breaf it is creativly made…
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you will have this desire to go and relax in their.
you wrote the wrong word.(there, not their)your paragraphe was very good, i hope you keep going like that!
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thank you i hope it for you too
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achraf hamid says:
The following picture reflects a splendid home. It’s archetecture is plain. It’s highly designed living room. In fact the home contains many cozy place like the brown sofa that make you want to sit and relax and the floor paved with greyich marble.
To conclude this is a beautiful living room.-
El mehdi achkir says:
The only mistake that you did is archetecture
Its architecture-
OK thank you for checking my paragraph.
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The following picture represents an open space, its a splendid home, it looks delightful, because de are seing the professional work that the architecte dis. Thé brightness is vert good, the sofa is very comfortable, thé floor is an artisiacally tiled. This home blew me away for its équité architecture
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The achkir’s paragraph has some mistakes like you wrote de but it’s they are and also you wrote thé but it’s the and not vert but very and not équité but
exquisite. I think you must work on spelling
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the bedroom reflects a groundbreaking innovation. In point of fact, the open space give off a feeling of confort and freedom. When we first lay oue eyes on the picture, we can see a cosy environment with a deep and accurate selection of not only dazziling but also high end and even bespoke furniture. this dream bedroom blew me away for its exquisite architecture and graceful embillishment.
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You wrote oue you have to write our* i think it’s from the phone .
There are no more mistakes the paragraph is plenty of new vocabularys it’s a great work-
Otho Douzi says:
think you you too you have a great paragraph
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The picture describes a designed house with some designed pictures displayed on the wall,after looking at that couch that seems pretty comfortable and cosy with some squashy pillows;
The floor is artificially tiled and covered with flaffy rugg.
Finelly the organization of this extriemly house is really mind blowing.-
This is some correction.
The picture describes a designed room with some designed pictures displayed on the wall. After looking at that couch that seems pretty comfortable and cosy with some squashy pillows.
The floor is artificially tiled and covered with flaffy rugg.
Finelly the organization of this extriemly room is really mind blowing.
Very good essay with any grammar mistakes and you use very good vocabulery and a exelente description.
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romaysae chaouch says:
the picture above shows an amazing and stunning room , as we can see in this picture there is a lot going , the room surrounded by some lamps , the room looks very cozy and comfortable , it would be an opportunity to come back from like work or something and relax on that sofa , as we can see there is two parts of this room there is the part where you can relax and maybe watch tv and there is also the other part where you can also relax on that chair and at the same time you can read books , this room is painted with some magnificent colors they really do give a touch to the room . I think that the selection of the luxurious accessories create a comfortable cozy place .
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Excellent job,it was very well-organized, and I didn’t remark grammar or spelling mistakes
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Your paragraph is clean and helpful to imagine ,i really like it you really explained how this house id looking like.Good work i really loved it 🙂
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Your paragraph is clean and helpful to imagine ,i really like it you really explained how this house id looking like.Good work i really loved it ,it is well organized 🙂
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Ahmed rami says:
The following picture represents a very beautiful groundbreaking innovations. It looks comfortable it cut the spacious effect of the light colors ,the materials makes the house beautiful. It’s artistically adesigned and the floor is tiled with a blend of deep homely browns and covered with a patchy carpet addition to this it’s designed with beautiful walls and comfortable chairs .
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